Talk:Emperor's Rifles/@comment-4158700-20190325223635

I like the concept of your chapter here so far, but I have some suggestions: 1. The name kind of doesn't fit with what the feel of what your going for here. 2. The Emperor's Rifles sound a bit like a Imperial Guard Regiment. 3. I might suggest looking at some of the names of the Raven Guard successors on here to get some ideas.

Besides that though, you got a real good idea on what they're about and the feel of who they are.